The Two Girls’ Swim Team at the Beach

Once upon a time, there was two girls.  And they were packing up for the beach.  When they got to the beach it was very cold in the water.  The two girls were looking at the swirly swirls in the ocean.  Then one of the girls said, “Come on!  Swim faster!”  And then they saw a bunch of starfish and jellyfish.  And they saw the birds, and there was sunshine around them.  They had a good time at the beach.  The swim team was swimming the frog kick in the water, and the dive kick in the water.  They also did the float.  (That’s the ones I like to do too).  They winned the race and got a gold trophy.  The End

Dictated and illustrated by a 4-year-old girl